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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-07-24 07:55 PM


Quite Simply


Why did my eyes
go to her?

Why did my mouth
so quickly
say hello?

Why did my heart
seem so sure
as it fell
for her?

Quite simply,
there was
too much
to adore
to ignore.


JamesLee
23July
2008





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amusemi
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1 posted 2008-07-24 08:02 PM


She is such a lucky gal!  Your love for her is so wonderful to see.
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-07-24 09:00 PM


Yo James,

There you go buddy.  Saw something you liked huh?

Right on Bro, there you goes.

Bobby

Indigo
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Posts 602

3 posted 2008-07-24 10:59 PM


the heart on instinct
finds the one who resonates
at our frequency.

Lovely write,
Indigo

HopeS
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4 posted 2008-07-25 03:29 AM


Quite simply , you followed your heart


Hope

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-07-25 03:46 AM


Quite simply, you never fail to notice the essence of sparkling charm.

Lovely, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2008-07-25 07:16 AM


very sweet, JamesM


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XGarapanX
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7 posted 2008-07-25 07:56 AM


Quite simply, there is too much here to adore, to ignore. Wonderful write.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2008-07-26 09:06 PM


Thank you amusemi, Robert, Indigo, Hope, Margerita and nakdthoughts for the wonderful responses...
Robert quite simply its my girlfriend sending fresh thoughts to my mind...James

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9 posted 2008-07-27 12:00 PM


James,

I so love how you write about her.  You both share something wonderful and we are so lucky that you, in turn, share with us.

Alison

ramisf
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10 posted 2008-07-27 01:19 PM


Lucky she, common you might be in love we can feel it from your writing. Good luck
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