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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2008-12-23 09:34 PM



Warmth
I remember warmth
it would come with glances
across rooms
it would come with electricity
sparks
a fire to burn inside

Remember?

Now I feel stale air
flowing into my lungs

If only I could breathe
this chill might leave my bones.



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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-12-23 11:21 PM


so sorry

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2008-12-28 07:54 PM


deserves a bump
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2008-12-29 03:26 PM


There's always sunshine after rain.

That warmth will be back, it'll just take on a new and stronger form......Row row row your boat gently down the stream
Merrily merrily merrily life is but a dream.....
Well written melancholy reflection in this.....It's the blues all over again.

But, the blues'll heal ya!


Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2008-12-29 09:46 PM


NIce...James
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