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aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD
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since 2008-07-07
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I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel

0 posted 2008-07-23 06:41 PM



Nature has its own rhythm,
yet why do we dance to a different tune?.

Robots seperate us at birth ,
and place us within this fabricated society.
Tell me something,
did the highlight of your day,
involve standing in a queue?,
therefore do you queue alot?.
Like part of some mass experiment,
we are rewarded with crumbs.
Not too many, nor too little,
just enough to keep us baited,
and distracted from remembering.
But i've seen a spark,
and one spark is all it takes.
Tell me something,

Why did you paint your concrete
green?.

              



Every step we take,becomes a path well travelled

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2008-07-23 08:04 PM


Liked this ;0
XGarapanX
Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
2 posted 2008-07-23 10:12 PM


Wonderfully written and thought provoking!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD
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since 2008-07-07
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I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel
3 posted 2008-07-24 04:35 AM


"Thank you for your kind remarks".
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