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My Christmas Gift To You
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My Christmas Gift To You |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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 My Christmas Gift To You A Christmas gift in festive red Unwrap me nice and slow Gently slide your hands along Removing each satin bow Lay me upon the silken sheet Open the gift on your bed Release passions from within With outer wrappings shed A Christmas treat you will see Dressed in red lacy attire Gift of pleasure is mine to give Fulfilling your every desire With my wrappings cast aside The gift is given to please Embrace me within your arms With your loving expertise Hope©2008 |
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Vestibular Bard Member
since 2008-12-11
Posts 284New York |
Dearest Hope, Your muse has me quite aroused. A wonderful idea for a Christmas poem. I 'hope' you don't mind, that I have taken some liberty with it below. The poem is so personal and intimate, I have revised it to be totally framed in the first person. And I've tried a different ending, hopefully you will like it as much as I liked yours. Christmas Gift Reprise My Christmas gift is festive red, Unwrap me nice and slow Gently slide your hand behind, And untie my satin bow. Lay me down on silky sheets, Best explore this gift in bed, Release your passions, indiscrete With inhibitions shed. This special gift, you soon will feel, Burning like our Christmas fire. This gift of pleasure, mine to give, Will fulfill unique desire. And when my gift, has been consumed, There’s one more thing to do, I’ll kiss your lips, and stroke your chest.. ...Whispering softly, “I love you”. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now that's a sizzling holiday card! |
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