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Stone Art |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Stone Art poker face sit to the window tonight clouded breath on separation glass wick lit in yellow liquefy slow drip pale the only warmth I see in disk dark outside in sleepy wind chilled naked desperate trees shiver empty rebound leaves turn spiral still tour silently aching in that lost connection winter has the boldness of stone art slowly breaking down the thick to thin in occupied greenless desolate desert selfish season please reverse this spell transform twisting change of direction unwind this crimson curse in grey despair "no darkness has ever been deep enough to extinguish my personal knowledge of love" Anne Rice |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wonderful, such a play with words and winter. yann |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Helen, This is strong with images. Thank you for sharing it. Alison |
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Callista Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 63USA |
I enjoyed this very much,for the intricate words and rhythm, besides just being a great read. Thanks. "The Moving Finger writes, and, having writ, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"naked desperate trees shiver empty" ...cool assembly of words in a bouquet of colors and verbiage...well crafted...you are always good, but better of late...much better (imho) |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed the stark setting and I echo the plea. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Fantastic!! Vivid images, poignant plea... excellent! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Helen, This is good stream of consciousness writing. I like it. Bobby |
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