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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it is easy to just smooth it around on the belly of some echo this small talk between us that has never been cooked through only rubbed on some window where we both knew the scent of it and how it would feel as a fillet pressed to our mutual hunger and sold by the pound it didn't seem sincere enough for good catholics when we were using god toys to keep our sanity in diapers but then again it still left us with that empty feeling of insatiable and we knew it was just a matter of time until we would sneak past each other into some gourmet kitchen bedroom and have a quick snack just to hold us over until we both felt starved together _________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, it is easy, this small talk. Smiling at the imagery. Loving the sound of it.   |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: A true appetizer! So good, I tell you, that you feed us your gourmet poetry with regularity! Love, Margherita  |
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aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD Junior Member
since 2008-07-07
Posts 20I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel |
Do you cook as good as you write ? because you blend your words with a recipe for success .I shake my head in wonderment every time i read your poems LOL Every step we take,becomes a path well travelled |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
What a delicious spread of words... a feast for the poet's appetite. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmmm... well I don't do kitchens myself but I sure would like some of what your cooking Mr Daark! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
gentle fingers brush small talk morsels to the ground, when words hold no sway. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks special lady _______________ ms mar, thank you for letting me touch your thoughts ___________________ friend az' you smile me with your comments...I do dabble in the evolution of cuisine.. _________________ gaelynsgirl' thanks ms for the eyes and thoughts _______________ ms r&b...would be fun to teach you some of my dining habits, thanks babe _______________ ms indi, your finger tip distance is more than comfortable for now, thanks hon |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Is dinner served. Smiled me this morning ya did...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks donna...you are a sweetheart |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Maybe some hunger can never be sated, D. Maybe there is only a temporary fix to tide one over - like putting a snoopy bandaid over a gaping wound. Maybe. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...or just letting the wound stay open so one can savor the healing...even banging it against something from time to time to make sure it still hurts...thanks babe |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Daark, i do love all the inuendo in this with the culinary feel. I have written something with a foody feel - ill have to post it tomorrow. xxxJanetxxx |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms janet...thanks ms, will check it out. |
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