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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-07-21 03:50 PM



I believe in your
Absence –
The brace of air between us…holding form
Against a fingers memory.
I believe the wind draws you near…yet just as
Brief you pass in swift caress.
I believe that space falls to
Our approach.
I believe in your absence…so full of
Desire in its answer to my
Prayers.
I believe…I believe.


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2008-07-21 04:16 PM


Of course, m'friend, the title alone
now has a string of violins playing
softly in the background of my mind...

but your I believe is as tender as
that very song. Never stop believing.


Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18
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2 posted 2008-07-21 04:22 PM


What exquisite imagery and power.


sighs...
Lynda

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2008-07-21 05:47 PM


The soar of the stars, the impact of the sun.  Superb!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2008-07-21 06:27 PM


an answered prayer, yes~
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-07-22 03:06 AM


Wonderful!


Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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6 posted 2008-07-22 04:12 AM


I believe too... beautiful and exquisite offering.. thank you !  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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