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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you spilled fragile on your gown and it soaked through with colors that you couldn't cover with your arms being crossed and pretending it was made that way I guess you knew my eyes too were an undressing room waiting and that your nudity was welcome as long as you stayed long enough to dry your accidental to wetness I had my back to you partly when you needed privacy to smile before you turned serious again and unfolded promises you had hidden and put them on as gloves only before returning to mirrors of tomorrow ______________ daark (white stone series) |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
I don't know how you do it, but you make the most of obscure notions and hidden meanings. I always find it very interesting to read you. I wish I had a primmer or translator to help me understand some of what you say, but the more I read you, the more I get it. You are very unique, I like it a lot!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I had my back to you partly when you needed privacy to smile before you turned serious again and unfolded promises you had hidden" very cool D  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
WT. Thanks for the reads. Chances are you read them accurately most of the time, they are just a place I go and most of us have been there. _____________ Ms Suesea. Thanks babe. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, ok, worthy of a very heavy sigh...  Beautiful in so many ways, on so many levels... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I can't deny that those moments away from the reflections of life are so worth the pause. Enjoyed as always sir. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms Sun, your sighs are summerland music. Thanks lady. _____________ Amigo Mark. I am blessed by your review. Thank you |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your poetic mind works in such a spellbinding way, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Vandana thank you _____________ Ms Mar. Thank you lady friend |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
... and tonight's bedtime poem is brought to you (and me) by none other than the Stranger. Settle in and close your eyes as pictures and erotic thoughts drift in the darkness to tantalize our dreams ... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
huh? wait...this was at the japanese breakfast bar while playing in lumpy oatmeal...grin thanks ali-san |
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GothicCherry Member
since 2008-09-16
Posts 471TN |
Very nice read. I love how talented you are in taking my mind off the rest of the world. Your writings are brillant. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
GC..Thanks...am glad to assist in moving the world away from your windows |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dark One, your titles conjure up tantalizing images even before a reader gets to the heart of the matter! Your pen drips sumptuosly sensual ink.  Linda |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms EA...thank you Linda...guess it is just a romantic monsoon out? |
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