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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2008-11-16 07:12 AM



I talked to the
happy homeless man,
who never reaches
out his hand.
Seen as sad
by those
who pass
and thought
to bear a
damaged mind,
because he
does not possess
the ability to
perceive his own plight.

He said he found
great humor in
the never ending
nonsensical notions
of important people
doing important deeds
amid the clutter of
important things.

I asked for an example

He said,
"Like...

those who are
LIVING

wherever they may be...

who sometimes wonder...

"Where will I live? "

He laughed

Took my five dollars

Gave me back two

and told me
to buy myself
something nice.

***

© Copyright 2008 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-11-16 08:49 AM


Left me ~smiling~ Larry...

M

amusemi
Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
2 posted 2008-11-16 09:02 AM


I love your homeless man...a person without pretentions is one that isn't full of &#$%.
HeliaHeart
Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 53
Georgia
3 posted 2008-11-16 01:33 PM


How interesting... The ending was nice, it made me think of kindness in all corners of the world, as we only see in dreams

~Lia
"Live as if you were to die tomorrow, Learn as if you were to live forever"
-M. K. Ghandi

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2008-11-16 02:46 PM


"nonsensical notions
of important people
doing important deeds
amid the clutter of
important things."

Yes, I guess many of us have nonsensical notions - we're conditioned that way perhaps.  Enjoyed your write!

Helen

Pantheress
Member
since 2008-11-02
Posts 215
Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2008-11-16 08:04 PM


Hey this was great,smiles.. I enjoyed reading this, Thanks
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
6 posted 2008-11-17 04:46 AM


what a kind homeless man he was! loved this read Larry... I like your poetry very very much my friend... love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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