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Open Poetry #43

A Little Vietnamese Woman

dollmaker
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since 2006-08-30

Posts 155
mass dorchester

0 posted 2008-07-09 07:25 PM

ONE DAY A LITTLE VIETNAMESE WOMAN CUT MY HAIR,

AND HER SCISSORS WENT CLIP, CLIP

VIETNAMESE MUSIC PLAYED ON THE TV,

AND HER SCISSORS WENT CLIP, CLIP.

AND I GOT NICE HAIRCUT.

THIS POEM IS A TRUE STORY, AND AM GIVING TO MY DAD,

WHO IS A VIETNAM VET, AND A MAN I LOVE VERY MUCH.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

1 posted 2008-07-09 08:05 PM

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good

John

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-07-10 06:09 AM

Enjoyed...James

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-07-11 06:19 PM

Dear dollmaker, your Dad will enjoy it. You have such a beautiful heart and I really appreciate your poetic offerings very much.

Love,
Margherita

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-07-11 09:46 PM

I like this.

Alison

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2008-07-12 10:19 AM

dollmaker, you are a living doll! You have so much love and appreciation in your beautiful soul. I'm certain that your Dad will be touched by your thoughtfulness!

That sounded like a cool hair-cutting experience! ~ Like you were actually in Vietnam! ~ and for only the price of a haircut! lol

Loving hug and a smile,
Linda

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2008-07-15 11:42 AM

interesting story....

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