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Huan Yi
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Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-10 01:11 PM


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Around her hair
The cool air
Swirls

Her long
Wool coat
Openly dances
Upon the road

And today
Enthralled
Flights of sparrows
Will follow her
Wherever she goes

Through colored leaves
Over autumn fields

A song of bells


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2008-10-10 01:57 PM


sigh
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2008-10-10 02:49 PM


A magical write.
              Ida

2islander2
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-10-10 05:49 PM


This is beautiful and precious poetry...Thanks

  yann

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-10-11 05:10 AM


There is such a lightness in this and a harmony that flows through it, something both for the heart and for the eyes.

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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