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sullivanthepoet.com
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0 posted 2008-10-08 06:09 PM



When bears my soul its’ darkest moments,
and desperate begs this journey’s end;
There stands at arm a burning beacon,
a caring face; A treasured friend.
All put aside his trials and terrors,
no heed to how his own cares weigh;
To take upon his back my burden,
and crushing not one sigh betray.

As grief bears down and steals my senses,
‘til every vein runs pale with tears;
There comes a hand upon my shoulder,
and my friend’s gentle face appears.
To bear with me my every sorrow,
no matter how his own heart aches;
Upon his own soul every anguish,
so freely from my yoke he takes.

While ruin calls my pockets empty,
ill fortune lays my table bare;
Though harbours he an empty belly,
his last few crumbs are furnished there.
Each borrowed coin so willing given,
no mind to if it be repaid;
Enough to know a friend is needy,
scant care he too be debtor made.

If will falls weak beneath my labours,
each tortured sinew nigh its end;
Close at my side ‘thout charge or bidding,
hard labours there my constant friend.
That his own sinew, nerve and muscle,
fresh from his own toils lie near spent;
No instant’s thought be asked nor given,
as free to mine his back is bent.

Without reproach so swift forgiven,
that angry word unthinking spoke;
Each selfish act so quick forgotten,
or thoughtless promise easy broke.
Those liberties so freely taken,
and all advantage wanton took;
No wedge betwixt our friendship driven,
as each and all are overlook.

Should peril cast its cloak about me,
in death’s black shadow dare me go;
Against my back, as faithful sentry,
stood fast will be ‘gainst any foe.
No hesitation, doubt or waver,
although his own life be depend;
Whate’er the task, the cost, the danger,
My sword, my shield, my rock… My friend.

© Sullivan the Poet 2008


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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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1 posted 2008-10-08 10:24 PM


Beautiful tribute to a friend we would all like to have.
                                 Ida

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2008-10-08 11:02 PM


sullivanthepoet.com - A friend indeed, one like this is truly a gift. Great write, stunning read...

BC

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2008-10-09 02:53 AM


wow!! this is beautiful!
love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

sullivanthepoet.com
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4 posted 2008-10-09 08:57 AM


Marchmadness... I thank you for you kindness and concur wholeheartedy with your view - would that we could all put a name to this friend...
http://www.sullivanthepoet.co.uk

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sullivanthepoet.com
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5 posted 2008-10-09 08:59 AM


Bill... I am flattered you found it worthy... Thank you!
http://www.sullivanthepoet.co.uk

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sullivanthepoet.com
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6 posted 2008-10-09 09:18 AM


Roniece... I am both flattered and delighted that it reached out to you... Thank you!

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