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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2008-07-16 10:21 PM


Letting Go

Little boy with hair in curl,
Pretty as most any girl.
Feed you well to make you grow,
Wishing time would go more slow.

Watching with attentive eye,
Guarding from the tricks you try.
Climbing in the apple tree,
Falling, may you fall on me.

Proud I am to see you growing
Even though its with the knowing
Each step is one more step away
From the little boy I love today.

For just this while I hold you tight,
Tuck you in to sleep at night,
Playing my part in the bigger plan
For the little boy, too soon a man.

By: Joyce 7/16/08

© Copyright 2008 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-07-16 10:52 PM


Yo dear Joyce,

This is a sweet read.  It reminds me so much of my mother.  I was ever so lucky to have her.

Love Bobby

amusemi
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2 posted 2008-07-17 02:51 AM


And to the top you go...this is wonderful!
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2008-07-17 02:55 AM


Very nice, Joyce.
            Ida

Musel
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4 posted 2008-07-17 05:11 AM


you excellently captured the emotions one goes through as we watch our kids grow up and make into adults.. The contrast between the love and sadness was very well executed. A  lovely read
OwlSA
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5 posted 2008-07-17 02:56 PM


Don't I know it, Joyce!  Enjoyed your poem, as always.

- Owl

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6 posted 2008-07-17 05:11 PM


Enjoyed your poem...
yann

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