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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2008-07-16 02:07 AM


Immorality in the Garden

The dandelion consorting with mere weeds
Is daring as she throws her seeds
In such a wanton, willful, way.
I fear she'll lead good plants astray.

She hasn't learned that less is more,
Common the world does not adore.
Such lusty, raw prolificeness
Has branded her promiscuous.

The progeny she has thrown about,
Are born but to be weeded out.
Had she proven herself to be well bred.
She could have had her own rich garden bed.

By: Joyce 7/15/08

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1 posted 2008-07-16 02:35 AM


Your poems about gardening are delightful.
Joyce. No weeds in your garden of words.
                       Ida

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2 posted 2008-07-16 10:40 AM


haha. but maybe the dandelion doesn't want to conform? to stick to its own ways?

interesting ideas here

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3 posted 2008-07-16 11:37 AM


Joyce,

"The progeny she has thrown about,
Are born but to be weeded out."

Not always, some of us do quite well.

Bobby

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4 posted 2008-07-16 12:40 PM


Bobby Dear.  Truly, I'm talking about the bane of my existence, the dandelion.  Love, Joyce
Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2008-07-16 03:07 PM


Dear Joyce,

Always remember, young dandelion shoots are good to eat.  The flowers can also make good wine.  I've made some excellent batches of wine from the flowers.

Here are some directions for making dandelion salad and wine.

http://allrecipes.com/Recipe/Dandelion-Salad/Detail.aspx
http://www.texascooking.com/recipes/dandelionwine.htm

Love Bobby

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6 posted 2008-07-16 04:24 PM


Wonderful! I love it!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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