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xxxFallingSixFeetxxx
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since 2008-09-16
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0 posted 2008-09-18 05:36 PM



Quietly You Whisper In My Ear
And Instead Of Words-
Your Heart I Hear.
You Stroke My Hair With A Loving Touch
Leaving Me To Ponder What’s On Your Mind
And Secretly Hope Our Love
Can Withstand The Test Of Time.


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WTBAKELAR
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since 2008-09-09
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Utah, USA
1 posted 2008-09-18 05:55 PM


My love is like this, although I know it will last forever.  I wish you the same.
wonderful poem.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2008-09-18 06:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
3 posted 2008-09-19 10:56 PM



Yes great poem. enjoyed.

Lindsay

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