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Open Poetry #43

Bella and Edward

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

0 posted 2008-09-17 05:48 PM

Sitting here anticipating
And with myself alone debating.
Wanting you to love me
Yet dreading the distant dream.
Knowing you can’t truly be
Everything you seem.
Your every move sends shivers, down my spine
And your velvet voice veers me, out of my mind.
A perfect model of the perfect man
You exist but there’s no way you can.
Dazed and lost in your addicting haze
I give up and surrender to your glorious gaze.
My heart may pay for the things we say
But that won’t happen as long as you stay.
By your side I feel as though I am beautiful as well
I have no clue how but I’m under your spell.
Quiet and sweet, is your gentle heart beat
Steady are your words, as you whisk me off my feet.
My soul I’d gladly give
If the reward is to always live
Wrapped in the chilling comfort of your arms
Away from the threat of all human harm.

Dark Icy
New Member

since 2008-09-17

Posts 4
No Man's Land

1 posted 2008-09-17 07:37 PM

That is beautiful...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2008-09-17 09:30 PM

NIce flow of words...James

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-09-17 10:42 PM

first, welcome...nice to have you...now, your write is somewhat Poe-etic in places...nice flow of phrasing and words...gently strong in content...very nicely done...looking to see much more to come...thank you

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