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Open Poetry #43
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-07-14 02:22 PM

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In the last
Light of day

Fireflies
Here and there


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Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-07-14 03:04 PM

Yo John,

That about sums it up.  This is a very good short poem.

Bobby
Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2008-07-14 05:25 PM

A moment of awe.

Enjoyed this.


Margherita
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-07-20 01:17 AM

Less is more.

A
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2008-07-20 04:59 AM

send some my way
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