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Open Poetry #43

Sunrise and Sunset

MsMelissaMae
Junior Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 26
Indianola, Iowa

0 posted 2008-09-06 02:09 AM

A picture painted effortlessly
with the pastels of nature's endless circle
only to be critiqued by the watchful eyes
of the clouds, who live upon
the township of Horizon
blown away but not in vain
they too deliver a quick swipe
of a brush, a media of color splashes
across their town such a welcome sign of this great stature, could only be aquired
from years and years of watching
what is truely defined as beauty
in return thier knowlegde
delivered us peace decorated in
Mother Nature's homemade wrapping paper
and tied by God, with a delicate bow
Presents granted twice a day

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-09-06 04:09 AM

Oh, this is delightful, dear Melissa! Two of the most wondrous events very beautifully rendered!!

Much enjoyed ... I never tire of watching day and night.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

TheAnonDavid
Member

since 2008-08-28

Posts 237
UK

2 posted 2008-09-06 08:56 AM

Some times Mother Nature needs a hand. There are those who do not appreciate the visual delights of morning and evening but they have your words to point them in the right direction.
It is plain to see that you derived as much pleasure from writing this as others will get from reading it.

Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Dylan Thomas

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2008-09-06 11:35 AM

good read

Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

4 posted 2008-09-06 02:52 PM

Just lovely!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-09-07 11:20 AM

Delightful Indeed!

ARCTIC WIND

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