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SkaaDee
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since 2008-04-07
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Canada

0 posted 2008-09-02 10:07 PM



In a frenzied rush through long nights,
candles too quickly burst into morning suns.
Doggedly, dark stars were captured at pen point
and forced into paper cages
to be filed under "C" for
concerto.
I
on the other hand,
was born into a purple haze of rock and roll
where the Stratocaster and Stradivarius
exchange puzzled glances and the car
stereo impetuously tears up the road
behind brilliantly lit
concert halls.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-09-03 09:24 AM


Skaadee, this is brilliant!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-09-03 09:51 AM


Hello, my fellow Canadian from the capital of our great country!

I was fascinated by your poem and so I wanted to "check you out" further! lol I visited your web site, and your 'jazzy' music is sooo smooth! You are multi-talented!

Warm hug from a fellow Canadian from the capital of Ontario!

EA

SkaaDee
Member
since 2008-04-07
Posts 116
Canada
3 posted 2008-09-03 03:23 PM


Thanks Margherita
you're a fireball of sunshine.

Hi Earth Angel

So good to hear from a fellow Canadian
and from such a brilliant city as Toronto.
I so glad you gave my music a listen.
I can't think of a better way to return that hug.


A sincere
cheers.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2008-09-04 01:28 PM


I hear the music in this, Skaadee.
                           Ida

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2008-09-05 06:13 PM


Enjoyed...who we listen to is a choice not dictated by when we were born...James
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