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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-09-01 01:00 PM


It’s past midnight,
and Bones
is two years old today.  

Mom and her new man

are sitting out on the stoop,
drinking beer,
and smoking their butts.  

They’re laughing at Bones,
tearing around on the sidewalk.  

They think he’s cute out there,
running around naked.  

The new man thinks
he’d be even cuter,
if Bones had a cigarette,
dangling from his lips.  

He lights one up,
and sticks it in Bones mouth,
telling him to suck on it.  

Mom and the new man
think that’s just about
the cutest thing
they’ve ever seen.  

Bones coughs.

Bobby

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-09-02 10:32 AM


sighing~~~ so must  we have compassion for these adults? Does one think that will change them?

M

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-09-02 11:11 AM


Thanks dear M,

No, you don't need to have compassion for anyone.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2008-09-02 06:33 PM


Bad habits and addictions definately affect the children...James
Robert E. Jordan
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-09-02 08:21 PM


James,

Thanks for reading and commenting.  You're absolutly right, parents can teach their children bad habits.  It's a bad thing to do.

My oldest daughter and oldest son both smoke.  The other daughter and son don't.

I smoke Italian stogies, and have for years.

Bobby

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