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Open Poetry #43
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seeker2008
New Member
since 2008-08-16
Posts 1
Maryland

0 posted 2008-08-30 01:11 AM


My heart is set for a race
Everytime I see your beautiful face

As I don't put on a false pretence,
Emotions rush over in your presence

Could we begin or end..
Or do we see a trend

I like you more than you know
I wish our friendship grow

I am not wise in the ways of romance
Everyday I feel the warmth of your presence

In my heart, I thank you for every thing you are
Tonight, you are the brightest star...


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Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
1 posted 2008-08-30 03:07 PM


Welcome Seeker to PIP. Such a gentle write
you have here. Hope to see more of your words.
Hugs BonBon

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-08-31 04:45 PM


Welcome to Pip, dear Seeker2008!

You sent us a lovely first entry, I can tell you have a beautiful heart.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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