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poddarku
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0 posted 2008-03-01 10:36 AM



The bird


A bird sat on the windowsill
And saw,
We are running after metals and papers.
A bird never understood.
It flew to eat a nice juicy maggot.

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LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29
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1 posted 2008-03-01 10:43 AM


Beautiful and philosophical

A bird
A bird sat on the branch with tiny buds
And saw,
We are running after inks and thought
A bird never understood.
It flew away, chirping.

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-03-01 07:08 PM


Dear Poddar, this is very nice and so profound in its content, in just a few words.
We have lost many of the naturally built in abilities to live in harmony with All there is. The bird still knows.

Beautiful!

love
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2008-03-01 09:11 PM


I spend a lot of time bird-watching, and they really do stick to basics.
An enjoyable, thoughtful write.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2008-03-01 10:40 PM


I LOVE bird watching!-- Its so fun, seeing all the different types of birds and you are also relaxing and breathing in mother natures sweet air and watching as her creations grow for the up-coming rebirth of your world season of Spring!

Thank you for this, Makes me want to go to a forest (in the spring though!, TOO cold lol)
and watch the birds as they make nest, and fly around, oh, and watching how many different birds there can be!

I would love to read more!



ARCTIC WIND

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