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Open Poetry #42
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2008-02-24 11:53 AM


Her neck so skinny,
As if my hand could rotate its shape
And make it fold in my pocket
Without her long eyelashes
Ever noticing,

With a warmth that blinds
The blandest ice,
The warmth alive her
Pink, lunch fingers
That sly around
My quiet stomach.

With her, like sleep,
Like autumn in June’s castle,
Keeping her awake,

Behind the ruins
Of her cosmic clothes,
The lakes top
Glazing over her skin.


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2008-02-24 01:36 PM

Tomer,

Strive for simplicity.  Simplicity works.

Bobby
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