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Silhouettes Lost, In Time
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Silhouettes Lost, In Time |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Unspoken is this desire to trace the curves of life joined in the lingering of speech spoken in the softest of sighs where realized are souls binding and thoughts are tethered in lasting embrace. Dreams remain in the shadows of fingertips touching. Lightly draw the breath from my chest and fill me with the song of your rhythm, your rhyme as we are defined in form of silhouettes lost, in time. {revised 02-21-08} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (02-22-2008 05:47 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpiritedOne~ Oh so gentle are these sighs~ Lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
There's an etherral beauty here, Donna. Enjoyed. Ida |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Penned ! Gentil Spirit!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."fill me with the song of your rhythm, your rhyme" ~ Oh, Donna, how romantically poetic! ~ literally! Actually, every line in the poem is, but especially the ones I just quoted. Hugs to you, dear lady, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, thank you so much for sharing a moment of sigh with me. Hugs sweet lady. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ida, thank you so much for the beauty of your reply. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Artic Wind, thank you for putting this smile here today.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My angel friend, thank you so much for looking in on this revamped write and for the most gracious comment you left behind. Hugs to you sweet lady.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
James, I am always so pleased to see your replies to my words. Thank you so very much for stopping in and resting your eyes for a moment. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
where realized are souls binding and thoughts are tethered in lasting embrace. I feel the embrace, dear Donna. You have rendered it so perfectly well. You wrap us gently in your poetic halo. love Margherita |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Donna You write like a beautiful song that reaches out to fill my heart. This, my friend & sister of heart, is absolutely beautiful. Hands down beautiful. Slam a tequila and marvel beautiful. This is art. You are beautiful too, darlin'. xoxoxo Alison |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Margherita, thank you for being so supportive of my work, it means alot to me. Thank you sweetie. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison my sweet friend, you are far to good to me dear. I want you to know, how very appreciated that you, and your friendship are to me. HUGS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where realized are souls binding and thoughts are tethered in lasting embrace. ohhh my girl, you just keep growing and glowing, don't you. Lovely write...thanks so much for sharing. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Donna!! simply exquisite! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Donna I just loved it. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
HEY DONNA -- (whispers) You have more people to thank. A PS -- I just thought this needed to go to the top again. |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
and fill me with the song of your rhythm, your rhyme GS- They are not lost in time, but carried forever in your being. This is lovely. Indigo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LeeJ!! What a pleasure to see you here and thank you so much for stopping by. Don't be gone so long now, ya hear?? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Roneice my friend you make me smile HUGE...thank you!! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lindsay it pleases me so much to know that you enjoyed this. Thank you my sweet friend. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Whispering.....OH ALISON....you touch me so many ways, so often. Love you m'friend.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Indigo, that is so very beautiful and I thank you for sharing it here with me...and I thank you for reading. Hugs |
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