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Open Poetry #42

one spring evening

RCat
Member

since 2008-02-16

Posts 70

0 posted 2008-02-21 12:56 PM

nimbly mountains tumble dream
starlight prancing oceans green
explosion! heaven hell divide
cherub flames thus arise
someone (everyone) spoke to me;
nimbly mountains tumble dream
pagan midnight dressed in blue
dancing swirling holding through
ancient rapids raged inside
flowed forever at her side
a voice whispered clear to me
“the only truth you’ll ever see”
her turquoise eyes seemed to say;
“I love you and always will”
nimbly mountains tumble still
falling deeper evermore
life to life shall Love endure!
death to death cannot disguise
spanning flames in her eyes
nimbly mountains tumble dream
starlight prancing oceans green
explosion! heaven hell divide
knowing none could thus survive;

we left the bar hand in hand

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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

1 posted 2008-02-21 02:07 PM

nimbly mountains tumble dream
starlight prancing oceans green...."

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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-02-21 02:24 PM

RCat,

Read, and comment on some of the other poems posted on this site.

I'd advise working on Standard English Language punctuation, and capitalization.

Bobby

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