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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2008-02-21 12:32 PM



A hot dame
With a rose lived walk
Under the street light
Traveling up and down
The Broadway street,

The diner’s ink
Stood like a figure sweet
And hot pink
Like the 5 inch heals
Under the dame’s black clad skirt.

Her blush shade
Like a symphony corset
On a woman’s deaf ears,
As her eyes, a nights cry
At the black silver
Around her dampened eyelashes,

A dampened skyline
Between a seductress naval and neck,
As the streets lying quiet,

A corner never eased
By a mans pail stare.


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2008-02-21 03:03 PM


Enjoyed...James
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-02-21 04:15 PM


I can See it all in my head already!



ARCTIC WIND

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133
LA,CA
3 posted 2008-02-23 02:50 PM


beautiful!!!
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