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Fallen Angels
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Fallen Angels |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
On this planet earth I dwell where once the wayward angels fell, when they set the serpent of knowledge free and relinquished their immortality. The burden of their rebellion we bear, the curse of original sin we share. Mere pawns in the clash of powers. We are the mortals that time devours. Ida Werrett |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Ida this is brilliant, I especially like the last line.... John "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow this sounds like one of the poems i wrote (City of Fallen Angels). my poem is like the sequil of your poem though. Great poem!!!! love it!!! ~Zach~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A commanding and compelling write! Damn that "original sin"! We just keep on paying for it!  Love and hugs to you, Dear Ida, Linda  |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
very, very good!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Yes Ida it is very very good, A real touch of brilliance A big warm hug to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I believe in original innocence and in the immortal soul ... but you illustrate so well what many perceive on this level of existence, dear Ida! love and light Margherita  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Margharita, That is very interesting since I really don't believe in anything that most people perceieve of this existance. My thoughts explore many avenues and the thought behind this poem could prove to be very different than one might think. Ida |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank You all for your comments and interest. I wrote this poem some time ago and it is one of my personal favorites. I guess all poets have certain writes that we favor. Ida |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Much enjoyed. You say a lot here... K |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, You have some very good end rhymes here. I like it. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Ida, I, too, like this one a lot. It is an amazing piece of writing as far as I am concerned. Alison |
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