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Calling Sea.
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Calling Sea. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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My mind goes out to the sea, how it moved me, swept my thoughts on its plashing waves. We stood and watched it rising and falling like a crying, heaving chest, it calls to me, to that bay, that now is darkended, calling along with the gulls cries and i must obey to walk, be near it and hear its call to decide my future. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Nice thoughts the sea calls me to, but the sand gets everywhere. I like walking the boardwalk, but have to stare at the breaking waves. Interesting construction to the poem. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a fine poem of both introspection and connection with Nature... I am most especially fond of: "My mind goes out to the sea, how it moved me, swept my thoughts on its plashing waves." serious applause!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
The sea always calls to me, even now as I live far from it's thunderous waves and ebbing tides. Listen closely, for it never lies. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So sad, lonely, and introspective ~ yet beautifully penned. Your writing is highly descriptive and I actually felt as if I was living your words as I read them.  Linda |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Goldenrose, This is beautiful and moves me. I, too, am called by the sea. Wonderful. Alison |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
to me the sea is calming.. I love watching it any time of day... lovely words here Phil... keep smiling love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I can relate to this one Goldenrose. The sea draws me when I'm in trouble or have to make a big descision. Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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