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Juju
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0 posted 2008-01-27 09:26 PM



Good bye Sy.  I wish I could have known you better.

small things


Could I hear more of your rhyme?
My memories are scattered
Like these words I am misplaced
Much like a hem thats tattered
Only you cant be replaced

Could I hear more of your rhyme?
I used to speak of echos
But those small things were clear
I wish I had made rainbows
though they were always near

Could I hear more of your rhyme?
The day is now at an end...
With these humble little things
I bid farewell to a friend
That you fly with eagles wings.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

© Copyright 2008 Juju - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-01-27 09:29 PM


I bid farewell to a friend
That you fly with eagles wings.

yes, a fine tribute indeed to our Sir Sy... thank you ... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Juju
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2 posted 2008-01-27 09:33 PM


Thank you.  I truly enjoyed his poetry.  It always had cheered me up when I was down.  I came to day, because I had a bad break up a month back and the ex is in a relationship already. I was going to read Sy's stuff cause I was really sad and now he is gone.  This is so sad.  I hope his poetry will stay on here.  He was a real gem.

-Juli

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-27 09:35 PM


you will find strength in his beautiful words my friend... go find them and let them make you smile.... I'm sending some special hugs your way to warm your heart... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-01-27 09:36 PM


Thats right Juju!

ARCTIC WIND

Juju
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5 posted 2008-01-27 09:41 PM


Thank you Roniece Dawson-Bruce and Artic Wind

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-01-29 06:06 PM


Tender and beautiful words dedicated to our dear Seymour.

May your heart heal quickly, dear Juju.

love and hugs
Margherita

Juju
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7 posted 2008-01-31 12:18 PM


Thanks Margerita, I will be fine.  I am like a semi tuck.  I am usually not the one severly injured in accidents.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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8 posted 2008-01-31 02:55 AM


Juju

I wish I had known him better too - and, like you, I will miss his poetry lots.  I will miss his kindness lots too.

This is a lovely poem; I think he would have smiled big at you.

Alison

divine chaos
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9 posted 2008-01-31 08:59 AM


Juju, I can relate .. Sy's words always lifted my spirits, too.  Loved this write of yours

Sheli

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10 posted 2008-01-31 12:08 PM


good read
Juju
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11 posted 2008-01-31 12:20 PM


Thank you, Alison, divine chaos, and vandana.  He will be missed.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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