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My Valentine
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My Valentine |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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My Valentine Early morning - sitting on the porch watching pre-sun fog shroud bushes, trees, patches of yard, first avian singers of the day - Thoughts on you still in bed, drowsing in just loved slumber, the smell of you still with me, the touch of you still soft on my hand, your lips still lingering, the sounds of love still swirling. . . Morning, dawn's softness. . . one, as surely as the love wrapping our souls around and through, over and under, in an homogenous blend of heat and splendor, color and light. Love, God's own, in the early morning mist. You and I the cause of it all. . . today, this special day with you, my Valentine. w. james beard, jr. © february 2008 ...actually I cheated. I took an old piece, changed it slightly to make it be a valentine piece when today suddenly struck me for what it is. j. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James, in all honesty, that is one of the most sensuously sweet and sensitive love poems that I may have ever read! I absolutely adore it! Not only are you a fine poet, but you are a very fine man!   Giving you a BIG Valentine's Day hug for this lovely penning!  Linda |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
jwesley, I always admire your art work, and this write is yet another beauty; sensual and loving. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JWesley~ 'drowsing in just loved slumber' *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* What lovely Valentine thoughts~ (for today and every day) *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outstanding write! One of the most lovely writes I've ever read! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I don't know where you are but you wouldn't catch me dead out on the porch this morning at 30 degrees here  sweet write here, touching indeed |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: A dance of wondrous feelings, dear Poet! Very captivating indeed! Happy Valentine's Day! love Margherita |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful. Age has made it even better  love the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...hope you and yours have a wonderful Valentines day...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is fantastic! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great write James, much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
James This is my favorite! It is so intimate and loving. A |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I remember this poem, Jimmy. I like the changes.....just lovely. Good to read you again, my friend.......jo |
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