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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-02-12 06:43 AM

she was in plasma
posing her mouth like life
that men would die for
and sometimes women too
she said it was all good

and recited her mary
three sixteen
where she so loved her world
she gave away pieces
in cellophane on fridays

down at the gin sinner's inn
and took them back again
on saturday afternoons
when the hearts got sticky
and left prints on her windows

I was just the cleaning man
with a rifle and a broom
and a harley out back
that kept me from knowing her
and that distance was the salvation

that kept me out of her heaven
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daark

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2008-02-12 08:57 AM

Dark...Enjoyed this little story from your pin. Maybe you should have given her a ride on that Harley. LOL...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-02-12 12:08 PM

this is very, I mean very good.
very good indeed.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-02-12 12:21 PM

quote:
she was in plasma
posing her mouth like life
that men would die for
and sometimes women too
she said it was all good

Awesome poem, from beginning to end.

love
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2008-02-12 04:44 PM

mr paul...she did ride..but that was as far as was necessary...thanks guy

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tommark, thanks my friend

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ms mar..yes she said that was the color of the lipstick..thanks lady friend

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-02-12 05:02 PM

I was just the cleaning man
with a rifle and a broom
and a harley out back
that kept me from knowing her
and that distance was the salvation

that kept me out of her heaven

smiles... well, a man with a gun, a broom and a harley might be worth knowing Mr Daark...

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2008-02-12 06:10 PM

I dunno, I think the Harley woulda made me wanna give in.

Loved this D.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-02-12 10:52 PM

ms r & b...would enjoy knowing such a lady as yourself too I think, thanks ms

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ms gs, thanks donna for the eyes on my pen here

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

8 posted 2008-02-12 11:14 PM

Well, D, the way I see it is if you carried all that and had a Harley too ... she may have noticed, ya know. A woman always notices the goods, even if we pretend not to be checking them out. She may just be holding out for a chance to shoot your gun.

Alison

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2008-02-12 11:16 PM

LOL... yes, I agree with Ali... every woman notices the 'goods'!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Fareed
Member

since 2008-02-08

Posts 75

10 posted 2008-02-12 11:22 PM

The last line is a killer.

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-02-13 06:21 AM

ms ali-san...on no...and I had that extra pair of gym socks stuffed in my front pocket too, case my hoofers got cold on the harley. Hope she didn't notice. thanks ali-san

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ms r & b, nonchalant is my favorite form of psuedoapathy, thanks babe

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Fareed, thank you for the read

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