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Cotton Speed
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Cotton Speed |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
She kneels to the nights Crack lip, Like a silhouette that Pardons the eyes of her Five fingered feet, As she sits So wondrously, Her arms undo the knot of shots That spends a lakes mile Watching her fall past midnight, Fall past a subdued voice That echoes off the nectar of trees That squeezes every line of Her hair in a different curl, A different pearls fury through A raison forest of the nights Cocktail wind, the beauty of Kansas under an L.A night’s smog, The merlot of lips Alike no other. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very much Enjoyed  ARCTIC WIND |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Good one, very enjoyable |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Enjoyed this poem. DO you want to tell why you titled this poem "Cotton Speed"? Tom |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Tom- Cotton is soft and speed is bliss to me, combine the two, and I thought it was a perfect fit for the title of a beautiful woman. -Tomer |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Thank you Tomer. Then The title is the necklace of the poem.  Beautiful and thank you for sharing. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks for the responses, happy you all enjoyed. -Tomer |
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