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MindBodySoul
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NJ

0 posted 2008-02-10 08:23 PM




Sometimes life brings us to a fork

The end of the line for something old

And the beginning of something new

The moment we choose a road…

Is this the time now…

Has the fork been reached…

What road to chose, which way to go

The old road has so many holes

Promises meant to be broken

Dreams shattered by selfishness

Words not really meant,

Just meant to appease a needy heart

A new dream awaits

The moment a road is chosen

Words may mean something

On this new road…

The possibility of promises being kept

The question is…..

Which road to choose….

The right or the left

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !
1 posted 2008-02-10 08:53 PM


glad to see this fine author traversing the grand blue sands of "P.I.P.-land once again!"

applause!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2008-02-10 09:48 PM


most times now I just go and not even think about it

waste of time to stand there and ponder which way

the road is going to lead to where you are meant to be anyhow

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-10 09:55 PM


very Much enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2008-02-11 03:29 AM


Nice writing...I believe it is rare when we come to a life changing fork...but at that time it is of great importance that we make the best choice...as the right choice will be smoother for us, not perfect or trouble free mind you, but smoother...life is about choices and consequences...James
effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
5 posted 2008-02-11 05:49 AM


It does not matter which route we take, it is where we end up & the people we meet along the way that matters.......

Enjoyed this,  John

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