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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-07-05 02:03 AM



Can you hear
Sorrow's calling
As the tears
Constant falling
Can you see
This heart so broken
Can you feel
What remains unspoken

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-07-05 02:53 AM


Yes I can hear it~hugs to you!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2008-07-05 02:54 AM


I'm sending some hugs your way too.. nice writing.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Inspired-8
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Pluto
3 posted 2008-07-05 03:49 AM


Thank you R Heart and RDB really need them hugs this old ticker broke again : (
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2008-07-05 04:25 AM


you are welcome... I'm a good listener if you would like to email me   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2008-07-05 07:34 AM


Intense! And I hope the someone you have in mind listens deeply.

Healing hugs.
Margherita

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