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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2008-07-04 10:59 PM


Angelo and his pals
have cast the hood
in a sulfurous haze
with their illegal
cherry bombs,
bottle rockets,
ash cans,
and squibs.  

It’s a war zone out there.  

Angelo knows Philly’s
where all the
good stuff started,
and he’s going
to fill the night
with fire,
and loads of boom,
just because he can.  

Eat your hearts out.  

KA—BOOM!
KA—BOOM!
KA—BOOM!

Bobby

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1 posted 2008-07-05 12:19 PM


laughs
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-07-05 12:30 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

It's past midnight, and raining.  Angelo's still at it.

Bobby

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3 posted 2008-07-05 12:50 PM


Oh man, I feel so sorry for you .. but if Angelo is having fun and not doing anyone harm .. I have extra ear plugs.

xoxoxo
Alison

poddarku
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4 posted 2008-07-05 12:52 PM


yes a vivid picture wrtten well

clever talks delay friendship!

XGarapanX
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5 posted 2008-07-05 01:10 AM


Angelo, like Frodo Baggins, lives forever!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

2islander2
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6 posted 2008-07-05 04:24 AM


very appropriate for the 4th of July, Lovely words too.

   yann

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-07-05 04:30 AM


Its 10:30p.m. and the fireworks are definately slowing down...I think they're starting to run out of ammunition...James
Marchmadness
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8 posted 2008-07-05 07:19 AM


Sounds like So. El Monte. Plenty of "KA-BOOM" around here,
                             Ida

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9 posted 2008-07-05 07:27 AM


When Ka-Boom means celebration and not war, then may it last the whole night! Well ... I think I might profit from Alison's offer ...

Enjoyed this.

Love,
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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10 posted 2008-07-05 07:30 AM


Well writ!...

from the city where is 'all started'!

[I wish this was the 'America'/'democracy'
  that the 'founding fathers' envisioned
   though!]

Explosive applause for this 'penning'!!

Robert E. Jordan
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11 posted 2008-07-05 08:21 AM


Thanks dear Alison,

For the ear plug thought.  I enjoy the noise, it lets me know the hood is alive and well.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2008-07-05 08:23 AM


Thanks Poddarku,

I'm pleased that you got a bang out of the poem.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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13 posted 2008-07-05 08:24 AM


Thanks XGarapanX,

Angelo and Frodo are second cousins, twice removed.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2008-07-05 08:25 AM


Thanks Yann,

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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15 posted 2008-07-05 08:27 AM


Thanks James,

It sound like they are enjoying the fourth in Kapolei.  That's great.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2008-07-05 08:28 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

It's great the kids are having a ball where you are at.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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17 posted 2008-07-05 08:29 AM


Thanks dear Margherita,

The noise doesn't bother me.  I have bad ears from too much boom--boom years ago.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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18 posted 2008-07-05 08:34 AM


Thanks Secondhanddreampoet,

Thanks for the explosive applause.  It is what the founding fathers had in mind--what with an African American and a women as possibly leading the nation.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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19 posted 2010-10-03 08:06 AM


This definitely was a fouth of July post but its good reading even in October!
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