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Spuddette
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0 posted 2008-07-03 04:37 PM


There's an angel in the churchyard
With his hands in the air.
He has held this hallelujah
For a hundred years
Ushering us to heaven
With marble veneer.
Today I struck up his pose
For what you might call a dare
For 2 minutes 16 seconds
I held it there
And wondered how long it takes.
Now my hands just dangle
And they wont let me in the pearly gates,
Because my arm shakes.

Hello Pippers. this is my first post. xxx

© Copyright 2008 Spuddette - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2008-07-03 07:32 PM


LOL, welcome to Pips.
Shake'em loose, hope for the best.

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2008-07-03 09:02 PM


Cute first post, Spudette. Welcome to PIP.
Hope you can still write.
                                Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2008-07-03 09:06 PM


Yo Spuddette,

This is a nice poem.  It's great to see you here.  I really like your handle.

Bobby

The Shadow in Blue
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4 posted 2008-07-03 09:13 PM


Spuddette,
Welcome to PIP.
You have a nice writing style. Enjoyed.

~Jill

jwesley
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5 posted 2008-07-03 09:55 PM


I agree...LOL....very well done...

j.

XGarapanX
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Antarctica
6 posted 2008-07-03 10:05 PM


You should be ok. It's when you are ornery like me that it becomes doubtful.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Spuddette
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England
7 posted 2008-07-04 01:27 PM


Thankyou for the warm welcome folks. You seem like a nice crowd. Janet xxx
kaile
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singapore
8 posted 2008-07-04 08:34 PM


welcome to passions. i like the thoughtfulness and humour in this piece
Sunshine
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9 posted 2008-07-24 01:31 PM


Welcome to Passions, Spuddette...

a lovely write, and a belated
Welcome!

Please check your email
for a Very special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Spuddette
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England
10 posted 2008-07-24 04:01 PM


Oh. Thankyou very much. That was very thoughtful of you. xxxJan xxxx
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
11 posted 2008-08-05 10:52 PM


I believe I have never read you're first post!

WELCOME TO PIP

     

Enjoyed your first post!

ARCTIC WIND

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