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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-06-29 09:14 PM


~Chardonnay

Burgundy pause haunts in heartbeats
That pound my ears, stutter my thoughts
Awaken my tongue

Still and motionless among
The agonizing mystery unveiled
Staggered where my dreams have trailed

Softly, poised to know
Every fiber set aglow

The time has finally come
Silken ties undone
Parted, as the words
Succumb

To spirits

For Chardonnay is sweeter
From your lips

Copyright Kkh 6/29/08



© Copyright 2008 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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1 posted 2008-06-29 09:56 PM


"For Chardonnay is sweeter
From your lips."


Lovely.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2008-06-30 12:55 PM


"as the words
Succumb

To spirits"

This is a refreshing thought as the day turns muggy warm...time for a chilled glass.
I'll be having a Sangria.
(Now, if only my love was home to taste it from my lips!!!)
I enjoyed this write, K.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2008-06-30 03:46 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Ericc
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4 posted 2008-06-30 06:00 PM


Wow...!!!
This is a favorite.

Eric

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-07-02 03:11 PM


Extremely Lovely!



ARCTIC WIND

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6 posted 2008-07-02 04:54 PM


Most certainly it is,  when from a nice
smooth set of lips.   Like wine,  fine,
wintage....slowly aged to bring out the
beauty of the holder...she who sips a
most fine wine..and dreams such memorable
thoughts........

The Lady
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7 posted 2008-07-03 12:05 PM




"The time has finally come
Silken ties undone
Parted, as the words
Succumb

To spirits"

sigh TD
just sigh...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-07-03 06:54 AM


wonderful Kathleen!!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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