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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-02-10 08:46 AM



adversary wings
dove loving behind windows
stones contemplation

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daark

scribblnote..sorry..couldn't resist



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-02-10 09:16 AM



oh, great senryu, dear D.! I guess it must be about politics? ...or couldn't it just be a sign of true goodness of the heart? Sinners and saints sometimes are hard to distinguish!



love
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-02-10 09:31 AM


ms mar, just something senful from watching the antics of a couple of hawks outside an aviary. thanks ms
Margherita
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3 posted 2008-02-10 09:38 AM


  well now, everything is sparkling clear!


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4 posted 2008-02-10 09:42 AM


When you do short, its so wonderful.     Loved this un big guy.
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5 posted 2008-02-10 11:51 AM


A wonderful Write Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-02-10 05:24 PM


ms gs, thanks babe

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aw, thank you for the read

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7 posted 2008-02-10 09:25 PM


I am glad that you succumbed to the moment.

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2008-02-11 06:09 AM


ms ali-san..that sounds almost naughty..thanks little one
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9 posted 2008-02-12 11:57 PM



stranger darlin'
why resist
when you have something to say
say it

it comes out so lovely


Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2008-02-13 06:18 AM


ladyone, thanks hon for your eyes.
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11 posted 2008-02-13 11:39 AM


I saw that stones were jumping.
Beautiful poem.

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2008-02-13 05:52 PM


tommark, thanks my friend
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