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poddarku
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since 2008-01-15
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india

0 posted 2008-06-29 05:52 AM



Alike flower
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Like a flower I born and die in the same day
And, reborn on the morning next.
Present is like the milk bottle, turns up filled on
Every morning at my doorstep.
I drink it pouring in a glass. A glass that can
Transpire what is in it.
And then I look at your petite face. I call this
Process my photosynthesis.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-06-29 06:12 AM


Oh, dearest Ku! What a wondrous little gem!

Profound and rich, emanating the essence of dawn!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
2 posted 2008-06-29 06:15 AM


Amazing.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2008-06-29 09:56 AM


So sad, but beautiful...
you look so sad at the window~

~ARH

marcel
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az, usa
4 posted 2008-06-29 10:02 PM


nicely described..........
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
5 posted 2008-06-30 06:24 AM


very clever and crafty
take on the word play here
snap the picture make it last

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Gaia
6 posted 2008-06-30 09:37 AM


Very nice!
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