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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2008-06-23 10:47 AM



Much More Than Seven Words
George Denis Patrick Carlin
May 12, 1937 – June 22, 2008

Although he really wasn’t
Everybody’s cup of tea
He was, a great comic
And he was, very funny.

He made fun of everyone
And of society’s flaws
He was arrested for it
They said, "You broke our laws!"

His, "Seven Dirty Words"
Are some, that some won’t say
But, a part of our language
And, always been that way.

His bit, played on the radio
And a man’s son, heard
But, his dad let him listen
And that’s kinda absurd.

He complained to the FCC
It went to the Supreme Court
George lost it, five to four
But didn’t stop, his retort.

A Grammy winner, actor
Author, and philosopher
He was true to himself
Said what he thought, for sure!

Considered the second best
Of all those funny men
I doubt we’ll see another
As good as him, again.

He surely was no angel
He doubted, "The Pearly Gate"
If there is, and he gets there
They just might make him wait;~)

06.23.2008


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity.

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TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2008-06-23 11:11 AM


Mourning him this morning with you...nice write.
gilead
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2 posted 2008-06-23 01:40 PM


A fine tribute to a man I greatly admirer!

Art

BugBuggy
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michigan
3 posted 2008-06-23 07:10 PM


what a very fine tribute to a very fine and funny man....I called a friend this morning to tell her a little bit of laughter has left this world...thank you for writing this for him and for his fans....it was great

BugBuggy

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2008-06-23 07:43 PM


I admired him much, and although I didn't always agree with him, he made me think.

I really like that in a guy.

A fine tribute to one of the great icons of our time.

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2008-06-23 09:09 PM


Yea he was one of the best.  His raw sense of humor is what tickled my funny bone.  

I like your ending Abe, I've come up a few  scenarios as to his reaction after they tell him he's going to have to wait while perfect angels check to see if he was actually expected in the first place.  I don't suspect they take reservations.  

God Bless him~

RC Langill
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6 posted 2008-06-23 11:13 PM


George Carlin died because God wanted a good laugh, not from George, but at him.

What the heck, the only true tribute to George's spirit is a completely irreverent remark. I can't think of anything that would tick him off more than the suggestion that God was getting the last laugh. Of course, George wouldn't have said "tick" in this situation, but it got flagged as inappropriate for this forum, a further tribute to his pioneering work.

Sunshine
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7 posted 2008-06-23 11:18 PM


If ever one saw and thought outside the box...

it was George.

Thanks, Abe!

graeshine2006
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The Prairie Lands, USA
8 posted 2008-06-24 01:05 AM


Very nice....
FastForward
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since 2008-06-29
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9 posted 2008-06-29 04:19 AM


George Carlin was awesome in his wittiness.  Personally, my family enjoyed his stint as the "Conductor" on PBS.


poddarku
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india
10 posted 2008-06-29 05:53 AM


a wonderful tribute
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