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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-06-22 03:03 PM




As if words fell from
Your fingers,
And my lips a willing
Page –
I lay written.



© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-22 03:12 PM


Well now.

Sounds like you had some sweet inspiration!



It's been too long since I've read you--you're very good at these.

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2 posted 2008-06-22 03:19 PM


wonderful.
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3 posted 2008-06-22 09:50 PM


Very nice.
      Ida

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4 posted 2008-06-23 08:23 AM




Deeply Expressed....

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-25-2008 12:28 AM).]

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5 posted 2008-06-23 09:05 AM


I have missed reading you
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6 posted 2008-06-23 12:44 PM


a beautifully written page.....

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Margherita
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7 posted 2008-06-23 06:04 PM


... and every kiss will be a reading session of your sweet replies to a questioning heart.

Dear Eric, your presence here is already an answer ...

This is a little gem!


222222222222222
loving you,
Margherita

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8 posted 2008-06-25 07:28 AM


How lovely to read your words again.  You have been missed and then bless us when I'm not around.  Still, I consider myself lucky to have found this now.  

Helen

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9 posted 2008-06-25 07:45 AM


my goodness.. this is beautiful!!  love RDB

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10 posted 2008-06-28 03:36 AM


Nice...James
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11 posted 2008-06-28 03:03 PM


very tightly written. nice!
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