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Ericc
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0 posted 2008-06-15 02:05 PM



Shadow glides
Across the
Ground –
Somewhere above wings are spread to a
Winds caress.
Love between air and flesh and
Feathers is made in flight.

Only the shadow is shown to me.

And yet I know…somewhere
Above –
There is this.

© Copyright 2008 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-06-15 03:49 PM


Your poem just touched me so deeply right now, there was an instant tear, your vision of wings is so beautiful, wondrous, heavenly.

Dear Eric, what a joy to find you in here again, you have been very much missed.

Thank you for sharing your beauty!

Loving you,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-06-15 03:56 PM


Etheric and esoterically beautiful!!!

What a delight to read this poetic offering from your angel-quill pen.

Giving you a warm hug and a smile,
Linda


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2008-06-15 04:43 PM


Why is it when I read your poems,
I feel like I am nude, takeing a shower,
like warm water being sprinkled all over me,
refreshing....but silky, soft, and smoothe...

You know you're in love, when you can't fall asleep,because reality is finally better than your dream~Dr.Seuss

vandana
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USA
4 posted 2008-06-15 06:53 PM


nice
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2008-06-15 08:32 PM


Very lovely, Eric. With few words you've captured the wonderment of flight.
Good to read you again.   

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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6 posted 2008-06-16 02:06 AM


A delight, Ericc.
            Ida

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