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Virtual Abyss
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0 posted 2008-06-04 11:48 PM


Sprinkle of rain

In the night

I'm not letting you go

Tonight

The tighter I squeeze

The stronger the heat

Of the energy flowing

Deep inside of me

So

Before I let go

I want you to know

That I'll cherish our hugs

Wherever I go



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Virtual Abyss,

I like this one a lot.  Good writing.

A

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