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Brandy Fires |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Brandy burns hot on my tongue. I simply hold it, savoring the flavor And think of nothing really. Nothing in particular anyway. Just holding my tongue and enjoying my brandy. As I watch you watching me. --- Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Alison girl, while you still keep the brandy on your tongue, your "brandy fires" rapidly expand from the reader's mind through the veins and set the whole being on fire ... with that mutual watching. It's the pleasure of savoring the moment and the pleasure of anticipation ... Yes, it's an incredibly stirring write. Very very well done! ...  is everybody ready to be floored?!Hugs, dear poetess! Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san bet you can't do that with an kiss? enjoyed the poem little one |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, This is a well written poem. Be careful of that brandy, remember, we've got our eyes on you. Bobby |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
We are all watching our Ali-girl... this was quite lovely... love RDB x Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Alison, I've been looking out for a post from you! Gosh, girl! I have needed my Alison fix! Mmmm! Mmmm! I savored the flavor of this one! What a delicious moment of appreciating and of being appreciated!  Loved the simmering intimacy of this one! Love to you gal friend! Linda  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Cheers...lovely write. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Dear Alison this is an intimate and very interesting poem about a moment that everyone has tasted, I appreciated it a lot and I am marvelled by its authenticity and simplicity... yann |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
I actually tasted the brandy, I don't like the stuff lol so if you don't mind I'll raise a glass of port to you instead  That was very beautiful. Cx |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
It is obvious the fire wasn't coming only from the brandy! Much enjoyed, Alison. - Owl |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
This poem reminds me of an old flame of mine, named, Brandy. Well anywho, we won't go there. Thanks for the shot Allison. That one was 80 proof! Rich |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh yes, nicely done. Savor the brandy, and the one who watches. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, Alison, I can feel the "brandy fires" all the way over here! Leave a bit for me at the bottom of the glass would you please, please. Helen |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Hey Margherita, Thank you, darlin', for feeling the burn with me. You know I love you. Alison ----------- D, Maybe I can't - but it will be fun to practice. Yes? A ------------- Bobby, Come on and I'll pour you a snifter. Thank you for your comments and support. Alison ------------- RDB Hey girlfriend. I haven't been seeing you much - but I love you and miss you too. xoxoxo Ali ------------- Linda, I miss you when you are gone too long too. Thank you for sipping with me. xoxoxo Alison ------------- Vandana, A hug and smooch for all of your smiles. xoxoo A -------------- Tina, Thanks for stopping in and leaving the sweet thought. You are a wonderful part of PiP. A -------------- yann, You are so nice to me always. Thank you. Alison -------------- Claire Hey, girl. Thanks for reading and stopping to comment. I am loving your poetry. Alison ---------------- Owl, You got me there! I have missed you and am glad to see you back on the boards. Alison ---------------- Richy, I reread the poem substituting the thought of your "Brandy" and smiled. It works, doesn't it? Glad that I brought her to mind. Hope it is always a good memory. Alison ------------- Nan, I shall always! A -------------- Helen, I have saved a snifter for you. I'd love to share with you and enjoy your company. Alison |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...on my tongue it would be cognac...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, James, my friend. |
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