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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
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West Coast

0 posted 2008-04-19 07:30 AM



mother belly echo songs
children is the wind when
she takes her walks at dawn
and moves the whisper papers
into a law school of debris

my anger herds the leather
and bends the metals mouths
to shout old thunder there
as saliva's on the echos
slippery spitting strangers

that have driven from eldorado
or some valley ghetto with gold
in their chevy car luxury
to know the sand again
and leave their seed behind

in the salty wounds of dune
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-04-19 08:52 AM


hmmmm... so you are angry at the tourists of your town Mr Daark.. but it's a tad early to wake them don't you think?   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2008-04-19 10:50 AM


ms r&b...not really angry...just a little thunder punishment for them...to keep them from resting stolen moments...thanks ms
Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-04-20 06:45 AM


Oh my, this is a powerful and emotional  write and I agree with you, dear D..
Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2008-04-20 07:02 AM


ms mar...thanks babe for looking in this window
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-04-20 09:27 AM


Very emotion Filled!



ARCTIC WIND

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2008-04-20 09:37 AM


thanks a&w,,,a bit of a hoot and some emotional randy too perhaps...
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