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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2008-04-17 01:36 PM


In your hollow moments of life,
find me there
where the sun shines
warming the coldest of days.

I am there,
surrounding you

   feel my breath
        on the breeze.


See me there
where bluest of skies
meet the edges of golden sun,

    through out the day
        until dusk has come


throughout the darkest of nights
until the birth of dawning light.

Stroll with me.


{for all of the angels, who have touched
my life...}

What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny matters compared to what lies within us.  Ralph Waldo Emerson

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2008-04-17 01:39 PM


AhGentleOne~
This is poignantly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
2 posted 2008-04-17 01:48 PM


simply wonderful.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2008-04-17 01:50 PM


Now, this is a song. It's good to see you lighthearted ...


shyvl
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texas, usa
4 posted 2008-04-17 04:26 PM


lovely sweet sentiment.  Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2008-04-18 05:56 AM


Thank you each for stopping by and sharing amoment with me.  Peace to all.
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2008-04-18 02:13 PM


*taking your hand*



Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2008-04-18 02:21 PM


This was very beautiful Donna...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2008-04-18 03:53 PM


Gentle Spirit,

This is very nice work.  Hilda and I will stroll around the hood with you anytime.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2008-04-18 04:13 PM


We all need some angels to stroll with us from time to time...James
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