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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2008-02-04 12:13 PM


I’m in love with a woman

Somebody I don’t deserve

Somebody beautiful

Somebody so smart, so gifted

So full of love

And life.

She’s so full of it

Every day I look at the faces

None of them compare to her

None of them will ever compare to her

I watch the faces

And hope that one day it is hers

Just so I can hug her again

This time i will squeeze her, and not let go

And cherish the greatest feeling in the world

before exchanging a few awkward words

While trying to hide the fact

That this small moment I am sharing with her

Is the happiest I will ever be


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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2008-02-04 12:38 PM


Sounds like you've got it pretty bad, SE.
Good luck with the girl.
                               Ida
  

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-02-05 04:56 PM


Joseph, this is lovely.

Awkward words are the best proof
of a sincere feeling ...

and don't try to hide the fact that ...

Profit from the soon upcoming St. Valentine's Day!!

love
Margherita

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2008-02-05 05:26 PM


Yah! I love Valentines day !

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

Bobby Jordan
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since 2007-08-13
Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2008-02-05 06:29 PM


EagleScorpion,

Not bad at all.  Your last line could be true.  It's something to think about.

Good luck with the woman.

Bobby

EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2008-02-14 03:25 AM


Thank you all for the replies..

but dont say "good luck"..

this is not somebody i am talking to or somebody i   will ever actively pursue a romantic relationship with ..  she is spoken for and with the person who is right for her as far as i can tell

i will hide my happiness because she doesnt need to know about it..

besides i havent talked to her in forever

she probably doesnt even think much about me


i dont know what to say about it..

besides maybe..

you dont always choose who you fall in love with


i know i didnt


it hit me by surprise one day... i didnt see it coming

it is killing me but it is making me a stronger person too.

even when i date others she is still there in my mind.... but i know we could never be!

life is odd and rarely fair

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