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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2008-04-10 06:00 AM


it was worth the walking distance
across my own comfort street
and around the corner of wondering

something about zoy shoe voodoo
and her liquor store lovely
a smile kind of music in her eyes

that made me think she had secrets
or wanted to know someone else's
and didn't mind the cigars really

or hearing she was pretty in her skin
with the red strap on her shoulder
and imagination only being imagined

when wanting more would be forbidden
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daark



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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-04-10 07:28 AM


quote:
it was worth the walking distance
across my own comfort street
and around the corner of wondering



Sounds like a perfect beginning, dear D.!

... forbidden things always stir the fantasy ...

Beautiful write!

Love,
Margherita

Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

2 posted 2008-04-10 02:19 PM


imagination,
red strap curves and tobacco
makes the trip worthwhile.

You weren't jaywalking now were you..? ;-)

Indigo


Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2008-04-10 02:42 PM


Ms Mar. Forbidden is a very special cigar.  Thanks lady

____________

Ms Indi. I was in the rogue's garden actually. Thanks arm distance lady.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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4 posted 2008-04-10 09:23 PM


this was enjoyed very much by me Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03
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Florida, USA
5 posted 2008-04-10 09:30 PM


Wow Daark, this makes me feel mysterious… like midnight black/blue. This is an awesome poem.

Tammy<333

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2008-04-11 12:22 PM


Thatsa nice poem meester~

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2008-04-11 05:47 AM


ms r&b, thanks lady friend


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ms larry'smom Tam, thank you for looking in this window ms


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ms bluezy, you should stop by sometime and check it out...would make you nervous...thanks babe!!

Seoulair
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Seoul S.Korea
8 posted 2008-04-13 02:42 AM


true. yes, true.
Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2008-04-13 07:10 AM


friend soeulair, thank you much
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