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Open Poetry #42

who's doing lunch?

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2008-04-07 02:49 PM

Why am I here???
Wondering all over again
what might have happened differently
if you and I had made different plays
shaking the feeling...again and again
yet still unshaken...flying with the Zen
exposing too little; while not hiding enough
rehashing the surface wounds over lunch....

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-08 02:10 AM

oh, the title is the answer.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-04-08 07:27 AM

I say just enjoy the food without thinking about anything

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2008-04-08 08:09 AM

this sums up a long term friendship I have...

and I alwasy show up for lunch.

enjoyed this very much.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SkaaDee
Member

since 2008-04-07

Posts 116
Canada

4 posted 2008-04-08 08:35 AM

it has a nice flow to it.

I particularily like the line
"rehashing the surface wounds over lunch"

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2008-04-08 12:41 PM

Thank you for the commnets. I just started writing again and I am trying to get my muse back... if I ever had it at all.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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