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Moon on the rear view mirror (assassin)
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Moon on the rear view mirror (assassin) |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Moon on the rear view mirror (assassin) ===================================== Moon on the rear view mirror Chasing the assassin’s speeding Chariot. Adjust the glass-view, Close your eyes for a while, still the Moon is just behind your car. An expert agent, moon shadowing The assassin, still dipping in Deaths of innocents, unawares. Take a turn and fancy loosing Him behind till his sarcastic Grin illuminates the mirror. The assassin moves to mop brow He thinks of the screams rising from The arson in a slam, he thinks The shouting smells of burnt bodies. Hands do not quiver on steering, Only moon on a steady chase And fog spreads on the obscure path. A scream so secret, like a drop of dew On a pool of oblivion, rises From the deep throat of a crime not so old. * clever talks delay friendship! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. Wonderful images throughout the poem. I'd rather be happy any day than be right |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Catching my breath, dear Ku!!! Incredibly powerful write with remarkable poetic heights, such as this: A scream so secret, like a drop of dew On a pool of oblivion ... I was waiting for you. Love, Margherita |
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Seoulair Senior Member
since 2008-03-27
Posts 807Seoul S.Korea |
always good, my dear friend. Love the read and the intelligence behind it. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Nice work Ku, you have improved tremendously in such a short time...well done my friend. John |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow!!! oh my!! this is fabulous writing Ku  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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